ooh! you submitted it sammo! viva la kid! <3 gluck on your test btw. kid ftw \o/

awesome job riku! the tech stuff looks fantastic. ahh the mountains~ terragen <3 keep it up!

very sweet lizzie! the angle of shinn+stellar/crab/boat shadow are a lil' odd. shouldn't your shadow be directly under you if it's somewhere in the afternoon? (even if the title says it's in the morning xD). maybe this is the scans fault but stellar's right hand (the one on shinn's lap) looks outta proportion/too small. the sand looks fine though it would be good to have the shinn+stellar/crab press onto the sand (i'm not quite sure how to explain this) so that they would look more incorporated into the wallpaper than just pasted there. the mountain most left could be runned through a few more filters cause it stands out quite a bit from the others =) but it's still a very gorgeous wallpaper~

the editing looks good but some stuff just looks a lil' out. one would be the left hand, it's not that bad but i think you and me can agree that it can be worked on, ne? both of her arms connecting to her shoulders, to me, looks weird. looks like she has some really tensed up shoulders or something. and i'm not sure whether it's just me, but rather than looking out for somebody, she looks more like she's dying from a heat stroke. lol.

i have no idea what to say except superb work. typography looks awesome and there's nothing to complain about. *if saki doesn't want this on antique, i want it on ca~~~*

the doujin looks awesome and i love the colouring style. there's a kawaii poring-like thing on her headband!! great job yina~

wheee~ a yumi-tized chii!! great work as usual mimi~ and uwaaaa inking! :3 aya-chan likes the hair and the dress folds. whee~~

love the doujin. looks awesome. the wallpaper is really something different from the usual wallpapers. the inverted lines looks interesting imo. great job frozen.

waii waii~~ niisan walled! rather simple looking but fun as well. that thing, shooting across the sky looks a little weird. maybe it's just me ~.~ but i think that the tail of that thing would be nice if it were just a straight line thing. sky looks awesome and so does the metal plate thing. great job as usual, niisan.

looks somewhat inspiring? ionno if that's the correct word to describe it nyahaha it's good anyways :3 keep it up crap.

copying from AP cause i'm an ass <3

this has 'cute' and 'adorable' written all over it! i mean, look at it! even the title is cute!!! lol simple and cute~ great job on it ai :3 *and if i say the word 'cute' another time i'll just shoot myself* ........ *shoots self*

her boobies got tied up they must be really wild na? great job as usual. her expression is rather sad to be floating up in clouds ;_;

weeee that's funky pandie. she has knitting needles and a ball of yarn in her hair rofl as for the patterns and stuff. it looks good and oriental-ish. great job pandie :3 your sketches are good too~

wall graffitti just seems to be my cup of tea great job on the perspective on the alley and stuff. lighting looks superb and yea. that's about it great job overall crap~

looks interesting *coughs and squints* overfiltered that i can barely tell what it is. btw, what IS it? love the title too <3

looks interesting and it has a nice touch to it. but i'm quite afraid that it has strayed a little too far away from the original bleach concept but it's interesting nonetheless. snipers <3 keep up the great work. the designs are very unique

i'm not exactly sure whether i should be picky and comment on almost every little thing since you blamed your 'hand' and is quite well aware of the mistakes you made but i'll do it anyways n_n just turn a deaf ear (eye?) if the comment starts to sound (look?) irritating :3

the eyes could have more 'character' + shape to convey the character's feelings a little better. body proportions could be a little more shapely to give a little 'life' to the characters. i think the guy(?)/character on the most left's hand should be moved and put it over the middle character's shoulder instead cause his hand looks like how a girl would hold a guy's arm rather than a guy holding a girl's arm. the guy's features could be a little more sharper(?)/masculine (only my opinion). the middle character looks decent imho. the little ghost thingy looks really cute as well (happens to remind me of a monster named 'ghostring' from Ragnarok Online, the game). now, on to my most favourite character in the doujin. her expression/design was done quite well. her outfit looks really good too. i think her body shape got lost somewhere between the whites (scanner problem?).

just little fix ups here and there and the doujin should look really really nice evan~ keep it up! :3

EDIT: sorry if my comment isn't fitting. you might have your own intentions/plans for the character's personality therefore not doing certain things. *didn't mean to be harsh*

clockworks + grunge = <3.. don't we all know that!? lol great job you two. i'm sure rockie wubs it to death :3

looks like you got your drawing touch back evan~ hooray for ya~ this looks great~~ and evan-san wears such a sexay outfit, no? XP i love how her hands were drawn, it looks awesome. great job evan :3 *two thumbs up*

the asteroid/planets needs to be a little more detailed since most of the detail got blurred out somehow. the building at the back could use some effects to make it look a little more anime-ish.the sparkles/sky should look a little more vibrant/shiny since it should be giving off the 'dreamy' feel. the scan doesn't really fit in with the overall wallpaper. it sticks out even more since it has a glow. nice attempt~ keep it up~

looks really great. i think that rosette is a little too covered up by the effects but it doesn't really matter~ it would be nice if you added some mist at the bottom to give the sense of 'lost' to the wallpaper. just my opinion. the title seems a little weird. maybe 'where do we go from here?' would sound a little better or maybe it's just me ^__^x great job anyways and welcome back~ :3

looks great yumi. gets me in to mood to rewatch chrno crusade hahaha. i think i've seen the wings before? or do they just look similar? lol i recognise them from your layout :X the feathers looks nice as well. great job overall yumi. *you beat me to walling this scan *

lol looks nice but the eyes looks a little weird. and sorry to say this *don't kill me* but she doesn't really look like the kaji in the doujin before this and i still love your cg-ing skills \o/ keep it up kazeki-san

i'm lazy like rockie as well :

*eat the wallpaper*

the colours don't agree with my tummy too much maybe it's just me? but i'd prefer it if there was a different selection of colours. great job on tracing chise's "thingies" (the green and the silver one) i also think that the blue things behind her (supposedly buildings) would look better ask spikes.